Good Words Alphabetically: F is for Friend
Firry Friend
whenever I went out I met
a creature to befriend
a grasshopper, a butterfly
who might not comprehend
my need to talk incessantly
but seemed to listen well
because they never said a word
just sat with me a spell
My gray friend, Ray the Squirrel,
Jackson Rabbit and Jake Snake
would wriggle at my every word
yet not a word they spake
I even loved the marching ants
that carried grains of soil
out the door then back again
in never-ending toil
(they didn't seem to listen much
I think that ants are out of touch)
one blue-skied day I spied a tree
a tiny evergreen
inspecting it, I knew it was
a friend I'd never seen
this new friend sported limbs and crown
and roots that held it fast
it seemed this was a friendship
that could last and last and last
I cleared the brush and branches
made clear a place to think
I thought I saw my little friend
give me a subtle wink
but spruces have no eye to blink
and surely don't have two
but just between that spruce and I
somehow the wink was true
and in due time that tiny tree
grew up, so green and tall
I talked a lot, it listened well
each year, from fall to fall
the stories that the spruce tree heard
were things I could not say
I hope to be like Stalwart Spruce
for someone else someday.
********alternate ending*******
One must remember, to listen well
you quietly should sit;
there isn't need to always talk,
so put a sock in it.
By Donna JT Smith ©2024
Lol!
I just had the last line pop into my brain before I got done writing what was going to be the last line...so I guess I was supposed to tuck it in there at the end. I don't think about these, I'm just taking dictation.
Haha I love it all- I really like your alternate ending- 🥰
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lynn!
DeleteLOL! Love the ending!!
ReplyDeleteI debated...I won. I got to put it in! Lol!
DeleteSuch a charming poem! I love the imagery of talking to the animals as they listen and don't talk back. So cute and clever! I think this is my favorite of your poems so far.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen!
DeleteDonna, you have a way with words, and a way of making me smile. I like your alternate ending... and now I'll put a sock in it. haha
ReplyDeleteSending smiles, Jenny
Lol!
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