Moon and icicle sky from my porch |
Here's the repost from Monday part (see below for an actual poem AND a rewrite of it I did this morning - forgetting that I'd added to it already online, so now you have two poems that start the same and end differently):
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Ed DeCaria at Think, Kid Think is starting the March Madness poetry
writing tournament beginning on March 8. Click on the link to go there
to learn more about it and see who's in it this year (I made it!).
That's the day the poets in the line-up will receive their unique word
and write a kid's poem that includes that word. The first voting round
will be on March 12, when poetry lovers of all ages and registered
classrooms will be able to vote on their favorite poems. The winners of
each round will go on to compete until on April 2 there is one poet
left standing.I will at least be competing in the first round! Yea! Maybe I'll move on to the next round - that would be exciting!
Hope you will consider joining in on the reading and voting. It is going to be a fun month!
Who knows...maybe spring will show up in the middle of it!
Heh, heh, heh....that was kind of funny...
Welcome back to school - returning to school after Feb. Break yesterday |
I Wear My Snowpants in July
I always wear a nice warm hat
atop my freezing head;
Winter's not the only time
I've come to really dread.
In Maine we never can rely
on days for bathing suits -
I wear my snowpants in July,
in August don warm boots.
Though summer days are longer
It would be finer fun
if we could shed these longjohns
And get warmth from the sun.
Perhaps before the snow flies
this batch will melt and go,
And we will make sand castles
instead of forts of snow.
©Donna JT Smith
New Portion
The Second Rendition
I always wear a nice warm hat
atop my freezing head;
Winter's not the only time
I've come to really dread.
In Maine we never can rely
On days for bathing suits;
I wear my snowpants in July,
in August wear my boots.
In midst of June under the moon
My socks cover cold toes;
At break of day my scarf goes on
to wrap ‘round ears and nose.
It isn’t always quite this way,
There isn’t any reason
Not to enjoy the one warm day
We have out of this season.
Put on your bathing suit that day
Get out there in the sun
On July fourth, I’m sad to say,
Summer started and is done.
©Donna JT Smith, 2015
So if you were to pick, which one would it be and why - The first poem or the second?