Wednesday, April 30, 2025

Z is for Zigzag and ZaniLa Rhyme

Welcome to the last day of the AtoZ Blogging Challenge! This year I am painted a watercolor to go with each letter and composed a poem to accompany it with a type of poetry that starts with the letter of the day.  I was experimenting with the watercolors still, so perfection was never achieved, but fun was had....

Clicking on the letter of the day will bring you to the main site which has links to get to other participants if you would like to go visit some alphabet adventurers!

 


Z is for Zigzag and ZaniLa Rhyme

The ZaniLa Rhyme form was created by Laura Lamarca. There are 4 lines per stanza and has an abcb rhyme scheme and has a 9/7/9/9 a syllable count per stanza.
Line 3 has an internal rhyme, which is then repeated in each odd numbered stanza.  The even numbered stanzas also have that line, but the two parts of the line are swapped around. The ZaniLa Rhyme has at least 3 stanzas, with no maximum poem length.

I think, and feel, I created my best for last.... and it didn't take me forever to do.  I think I've progressed some, along with just having fun, which were both my goals!  So "SCORE!"

Here, now, is THIS year's final Blogging A to Z Challenge poem and watercolor:


 

 

 Z is for Zigzag

The waves point up then the crests curve down,
the sea zigs and zags to shore;
up, down, to and fro - this ebb and flow
dances across deep ocean's dark floor
 
Starfish zig their arms that look like zags,
a sailboat zigs and zags, too;
this ebb and flow - up, down, to and fro
with barely a straight line in birds' view!
 
Even this timid, scared rabbit will
zigzag like momma taught her 
up, down, to and fro - this ebb and flow 
Rabbit looks like fast flowing water. 
 
A zig or zagging in life can be
a welcome, or not, heart change; 
this ebb and flow - up, down, to and fro 
can be stressful and painfully strange. 

The waters flow, the scared rabbit runs
and sailboats tack to travel;
up, down, to and fro - this ebb and flow 
is a life to live and unravel.
 
By Donna JT Smith ©2025 

 

Bonus poem: 

As a finale in 2012 I wrote a Z poem that wasn't really theme related...just felt like writing it. This is NOT my poem for today (that's above).  This is just for fun – an oldie!

Z-z-z-z
 
Zip zap zing 
Who says z's are not the thing 
To make a poem sing? 
Zombie, zilch, zits 
These are just the pits,
But zooming, zesty, zealous 
make plainer words 
Quite jealous. 
And then you always have 
The z that's in the middle 
Wizard, lizard, drizzle. 
Pizza, razzed and fizzle.
And if that's not enough, friend 
You have them at the end then 
Like whiz and fizz and jazz 
Which give this poetic spaz 
Some dazzling razzmatazz!  
 
© 2012, Donna JT Smith
 
Have a marvelous May! 
I hope you enjoyed the Blogging from AtoZ Challenge as much as I did!  
 
 

13 comments:

  1. Very fun poem! Thanks for sharing, or resharing. I hope you're enjoying the A to Z Challenge. Please check out the giveaway on my blog.

    J Lenni Dorner (he/him 👨🏽 or 🧑🏽 they/them) ~ Speculative Fiction & Reference Author and Co-host of the April Blogging #AtoZchallenge

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    1. I like the challenge of writing and painting every day. I don't know if I can keep myself challenged in May, but I'll try!

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  2. Jamie (jannghi.blogspot.com): Very fun. Congrats on making it to the end. I can't believe it's over now!

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  3. Excellent closing for your 2025 Challenge! Congratulations on making successfully to the end.

    Lee

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    1. Yes, we did! I was trying to comment on your site but for some reason I couldnl't get to comments today. I don't know what's going on. I think on Friday I'm getting a new computer though. This one is 19 years old and the speakers and battery don't work. Not handy!

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  5. I enjoyed this and glad to see you participated again this year. I found you last year!

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  6. Congratulations on a strong finish! I learned some interesting new forms from you this year.

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  7. Thanks for coming by and commenting! This is always a good challenge for my brain with all the forms.

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Z is for Zigzag and ZaniLa Rhyme

Welcome to the last day of the AtoZ Blogging Challenge! This year I am painted a watercolor to go with each letter and composed a poem to a...