Monday, April 21, 2025

R is for Rabbit and Rictameter

 It's April, so the Blogging from AtoZ Challenge is in full swing. My theme is Watercolor and Words.  This year I am painting a watercolor to go with each letter and composing a poem to accompany it with a type of poetry that starts with the letter of the day.  I am mostly experimenting with the watercolors still, so don't expect perfection....

Clicking on the letter of the day will bring you to the main site which has links to get to other participants if you would like to go on an alphabetical adventure!

 

Today I have my watercolor rabbit and a Rictameter poem form.

Here's the decoder ring for writing a Rictameter:

2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2  denotes the number of syllables in each line, increasing by two syllables for each line until the fourth line, then decreases by two syllables.  The first line starts with a two syllable word and the last line is the same as the first line. 

So, here we go.  Rabbit has two syllables...so I already know the first and last lines, unless I change it to "hopping" or "bunny" or "springtime"...

 

Rabbit

Shy, retiring,

Nibbles dandelions

In the evening as sun sets

Nose twitches, each breeze delivers more spring

She freezes, Fox trots through the field,

Into the scene she melts,

Invisible

Rabbit.

by Donna JT Smith ©2025

2 comments:

  1. Peter
    Cotton Tail Hare
    Eats my flower blossoms
    Pulls petals through the little holes
    Reaches high above the critter cage wire
    Nibble veggies without a care
    Pellet gun stands empty
    Another day
    Peter
    *******
    That was fun. Little monsters!

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    1. Nice! Love it, and love that you took time and had fun puzzling out a Rictameter poem!

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