I am participating in the A to Z Challenge this month, and today's
letter is T.
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I wrote a Wedge verse also known as a Rhopalic. More about this form here
Rhopalic - Each succeeding unit is longer than the preceding one. Applied to a line, it means that each successive word is a syllable longer that its predecessor. Applied to a stanza, each successive line is longer by either a syllable or a metrical foot.
This didn't make a lot of sense to me, so I have to go looking for a sample of it. Otherwise it looks a lot like and Etheree....
Here's one where each word is one syllable longer:
Wolf
howling,
echoing,
penetrating,
reverberating,
Indefatigable,
individualistic
territorialization
by Donna JT Smith, ©2018
And then I did this one where each line is a syllable longer. I hope this is right. I like this second one...almost an etheree - just not 10 lines.
Wolf’s
Echoes
Refill night’s
Sail with wild wails
His song washing stars
Silver moon shimmers cold
Penetrating night’s presence
Wolf’s howls a turmoil under gray
By Donna JT Smith, ©2018
Oh, wait, I get the first one now...But wait... How about this format? I am naming this one
Wolves howling nocturnal emanations
calling companions reunited
surreal circumstances
congregating
Lovely read
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Very nice. I got such a clear image of the wolves and their howls, and I could almost feel the silver moon shimmering cold! Melanie's Stories
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