Find out more information about this flower, and other names it can go by in other countries here.
If you want to see how my husband and I learned to become responsible homeowners, you can go to The Lawn Less Mowed. There are dandelions involved.
How to Know a Dandelion
green teeth as
lion’s ilk,
hollow straw of
bitter milk,
yellow burst with
sunny face,
hoary head for
seedy race
hollow straw of
bitter milk,
yellow burst with
sunny face,
hoary head for
seedy race
©Donna JT Smith, 2014
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And here is an older poem I'd written and posted for the 2012 A to Z challenge for the letter Y, that is also about a dandelion. It is written as a Yadu* - a tricky form.
Y is for Yellow
yellow sun floods
the field buds bright
in mud of spring
the birds sing of
the bling of yellow dandelions
© 2012, Donna JT Smith
*The yadu (ya-du and yatu) is a Burmese form of poetry which consists of up to three stanzas of five lines. The first four lines of a stanza have four syllables each, but the fifth line can have 5, 7, 9 , or 11 syllables. A yadu should contain references to the seasons.
It has a climbing rhyme. The rhyme is on the fourth, third, and second syllables of both the first three lines and the last three lines.
yellow sun floods
the field buds bright
in mud of spring
the birds sing of
the bling of yellow dandelions
© 2012, Donna JT Smith
*The yadu (ya-du and yatu) is a Burmese form of poetry which consists of up to three stanzas of five lines. The first four lines of a stanza have four syllables each, but the fifth line can have 5, 7, 9 , or 11 syllables. A yadu should contain references to the seasons.
It has a climbing rhyme. The rhyme is on the fourth, third, and second syllables of both the first three lines and the last three lines.
I love the 'yellow burst with sunny face.' That describes a dandelion perfectly!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mary. They are a happy looking flower!
Deletei like the dance in your rhyme...cool rhyme scheme...
ReplyDeletei am rather fond of dandelions
i think i tasted one as a kid and dont
remember it tasting all that great.
You are right. As a kid, I'd forget to wash my hands after picking some, and then eat lunch. So, so bitter!
DeleteOh so very nice to write poems for the lowly dandelion! When I was little I always got so excited about seeing dandelions popping out. Then as an adult and a homeowner I only saw them as pests.
ReplyDeleteI just added this link above: http://mainelywrite.blogspot.com/2013/03/the-lawn-less-mowed.html
Deletea story about becoming an adult and a homeowner and our dandelion lesson.
Great use of a form I had never heard of! I like the images in your poem.
ReplyDeleteIt was a challenge, but aren't poetry challenges fun!
DeleteYellow burst - great image and wonderfully written. Original and lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alan! Oh, to have some dandelions now! Snow storm coming in at noon tomorrow.
DeleteThe bling of dandelions... I love that!
ReplyDeleteThey do have a certain bling to them! Thanks for dropping by!
Deleteenjoyed; have a nice Wednesday
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Today was a beautiful, cold day...not looking forward to the snow tomorrow.
DeleteI tasted Dandelion Wine once - can't remember the exact taste only that I didn't like it. Maybe it was the bitter milk that gave it the bad taste!
ReplyDeleteNever had it. I can't imagine how it could be anything but bitter!
DeleteI enjoyed both of these. The Yadu sounds like a complicated form but looks like you did it well.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Peggy. It was an interesting form. I kind of enjoyed it.
DeleteNice to hear about a little 'bling' in Maine, Donna. Hope this storm isn't too bad. It's so hard to tell from the news. They're so sensational! Thanks for the poems.
ReplyDeleteWe don't have dandelions yet, but I bought myself some mini-daffodils that are blooming in the kitchen window!
DeleteIt is supposed to be a fairly big storm. I'll let you know how it goes!
I love this: Dandelions are the "Bling" in a garden! Oh so perfect!
ReplyDeleteWe have more wild "bling" here than intentionally planted "bling"! If a garden can take care of itself, that's my kind of garden!
DeleteSome merry metaphors in this sunny, fun piece.
ReplyDeleteSome pieces are just fun to write. This was one of those.
Deletelove 'the bling of yellow dandelions' ... what a great image!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad we have the word "bling"!
DeleteNicely writ! Enjoyed both offerings!
ReplyDeleteBoth poems are wonderful, Donna. I was not familiar with the Yadu, and now I must experiment with this form.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Nicholas! I enjoyed working within the parameters of the Yadu. It's a fun format. Hope to read one of yours sometime!
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