15 Words or Less: Returning Thoughts

In 15 Words or Less - my response to Laura Salas' challenge for Thursdays....Go there to see the photo prompt and read other responses to it.

Currents of thoughts,
like water through
a trap,
with turning tides,
yet untapped.


  1. That was an amazing sculpture, wasn't it? Great to talk of the 'emptiness' of it, 'water through a trap'!

    1. It was. As soon as I saw it I thought of lobster traps with their colorful coated wire bodies. Then the thought that, like water, you couldn't trap a thought in there, but it could flow back in... much the way my brain works!


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