I took this picture while I was out on my "summer day" at the beach in January. It's my second roots picture and poem. I'm seeing a trend here. I like roots. I'd best get my camera refocused for a little variety, though.
Its fingers reach up to the sky -
They once caressed the earth;
It floated to its place of rest
Now sand supports its girth.
As smooth seat or a playground,
Old and young will find
It comforts and consoles them,
Their tight souls to unwind
In heart to heartwood talks
A burden that's revealed
Becomes embedded in its core
And in its rings concealed
The weight of all those cares
Will keep it in this spot
But should it ever drift away
It would not speak my thought.
Donna Smith
2/9/2012
I'm late tonight-very busy day! It's neat that you are finding a theme to pursue. The photo is great, especially that you saw this & captured it. And the words 'heart to heartwood' is a beautiful play on words. Thanks, Donna. And additional thanks for the idea for my tagxedo; I made up some laminated cards to say thank you with them next week. I'll let you know what happens!
ReplyDeleteHow frustrating to have your poem deleted! Arg! I'm glad that you were able to reconstruct it. The third stanza is my favorite. Have a great weekend.
ReplyDeleteWhat a dramatic photograph! I love the "heart to heartwood talk".....I've had many a moment seated on a tree stump deep in thought...now I see them as wasted moments of unnecessary solitude!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely! My favorite stanza is:
DeleteIn heart to heartwood talks
A burden that's revealed
Becomes embedded in its core
And in its rings concealed
Perfection. Maybe the accidental deletion was exactly what was needed!