Browns and grays
Where shades of
Reds and oranges
Flutter to the ground
And here's the correct answer:
Yup. Now read it again, and see if you can see....
Okay, this one went through so, so, so many revisions. Wish I'd done it in Google Doc's and kept the history, just so I could easily see its morphing. I think this is the best I can do with it. But really, wow. I'm so strangely impressed with its development. I guess, actually my bravery in cutting whole lines and groups of words...cutting way back from what I started with, to leave the essence (I hope.) I don't know if it will make sense to anyone else in its simplest form. Can you tell me what it is about?
I really wanted to try to write something that people would understand but that wouldn't be as straightforward as using the actual words/things I was talking about in it. When I read it, I can tell what I'm talking about, but can you?
I don't think I'm being too obtuse, but then again...how does someone know that about themselves.
If you're obtuse, wouldn't you be too obtuse to know it?