Laura Purdie Salas has her 15 Words or Less Poem Challenge today, with a picture of a storm brewing over a skyline. Here's my offering today. It reminded me of a storm coming in over the trees and bluffs of Hokah, Minnesota, when we lived there - and LaCrosse, Wisconsin, when I taught there back a lifetime ago! It's been long enough that I can look at it differently; back then it was much more serious. Not sure I ever smiled when a storm laughed overhead. Especially that one that leveled the home we were building and strew the broken pieces of the house over the valley. Not funny at all, unless you ARE the storm.
This was not in MN - but in ME one night while out riding around.
Firs and bluffs Tickle the sky Chortles rumble As tears tumble From storm’s eye.
BTW: This figure was one I found on the beach between rocks. He'd been abandoned between a rock and a hard place, so I picked him up off the deserted beach and took him home.
My grandson, who is now 5 11/12, loves the rescued man, the book and the stuffed animal. It was his idea to recline the man on the rhino's snout (look back at the book and rhino picture), copying the picture on the book cover. I haven't read him the poem yet. When they visit in August, I will read it to him. Hope he brings the rhino for a visit!
I want a rhino, big and fine;
A rhino that I call all mine!
I’d love her dainty rhinocertoes,
Her very pointy rhinocernose;
My love is rhino-genuine!
In my bathtub let her brine,
Brush her till she starts to shine!
When we’re finished doing that,
She could don my big sunhat;
In our deck chairs we’d recline.
Supine in the warm sunshine
Could it be it’s time to dine?
Browsing grass and leaves at brunch
Downing berry pies for lunch
Gives no thought to her waistline!
I’m in the “Buy a Rhino” line!
I’ll take sweet rhino number nine!
I want that huge rhinoceros,
No matter what the cost to us!
Remove her “Rhino For Sale” sign!
No longer will I sigh or pine;
No need for her to rhino-whine
This rhino’s coming home with me
For cookies, honey and some tea;
My world is now rhino-divine!
This distant cousin of equine
That some say looks like Frankenstein
Proves beauty's in beholder’s eye,
I think she's quite a cutie pie!
Perhaps I’ll name her Valentine!
Tabatha Yeatts, our Poetry Friday hostess today at The Opposite of Indifference asked around to see if anyone else would be interested in using this special day as a prompt for their Poetry Friday post.
I'm in! So to celebrate this day, here is my Macaroni and Cheese poem.
I am gluten sensitive, and need to maintain low carb, so this is not my meal of choice anymore... but it is good stuff, and I remember it fondly!
Here's an interesting One Pot Mac and Cheese recipe to try. Looks easy and yummy. I've done a one pot spaghetti that came out great. I might try this with a gluten free sauce and pasta sometime when I'm feeling like I can add a carb or two! (sorry for the ad!) If you wait through another ad you can see a Wafer Tater Tot Cheese and Bacon Sandwich...not Mac and Cheese, but I think I may have to do this someday! When is National Tater Tot Day?
Here's my tribute to the meal of the day, jumping rope, and Mom's rules:
Ma Macaroni's Warning (a cautionary tale)
“Keep your elbows off the table,”
Ma Macaroni said.
“For that’s the day, I’m sad to say,
That you’ll be boiled and dead.
They’ll bury you in cheese sauce
With other elbow fellows
And bake you as a casserole
Until you’re golden yellow.
Then one by one and fork by fork
They’ll eat your hollowed hide,
And there’ll be nothing left of you!"
Ma Macaroni cried.
“Heed my warning, pasta,
No elbows on the table,
Or you’ll be in hot water
As dear Mabel sets the table!”
But then one day they all forgot
Ma Macaroni's law,
For pasta has such little sense
(Indeed their major flaw);
"Is it almost time to eat?
I set the table fast!
Is the pasta ready?"
Miss Mabel sweetly asked.
"It's ready! Come and eat!" Mom called,
Putting elbows on the table.
"Please, pass the cheesy pasta!"
Was the cheer from dear Miss Mabel.
Now there are no more elbows
on the table or a dish:
Tomorrow is another day
What's the rule for fish?
It has to do with fires,
And avoiding frying pans -
But that is for another day
And some old man named Dan.
by Donna JT Smith, 2017
More macaroni and cheese, please!
Jump rope chant:
Mabel, Mabel, Set the table
Don't forget the salt and pepper!
(lots of versions... but this is the one we said)
Dan, Dan, the fine old man,
Washed his face in the frying pan,
Combed his hair with the leg of the chair,
Dan, Dan, the fine old man.
Please, please, make sure you have checked in at Tabatha's to see her poetic contribution today, AND all the other macaroni maniacs' commemorations, and the contributions of those who chose another poem for today. You won't be disappointed!
Welcome to my Poetry Friday post. There are lots and lots of poetry sites to visit, if you've never been to a Poetry Friday Party, go visit our hostess Carol at Beyond Literacy Link and click on more links!
Last week I showed you the front of my "business card"...in quotes because, well, is it a business? I guess it's my "writer's card". A card I can hand out when I'm writing something and need to let the person know what I'm doing. Sometimes it might involve them, as being like the star of a poem...or their license plate or lobster boat is my topic. It means they can easily get to the site and see what I've written. I've handed out one card. There isn't a big rush on them. But I'm ready!
Here's the front again:
On the back I have part of this poem about whales:
A Wail of Whales
Once I heard
a herd at sea
The scene was seen
by none but me
I called and heard
The herd call back
A wail of whales -
Some plump humpbacks
Their siren cries
Salted the sea
The yearning calls
And I walked in
Braved frothy waves
To greet them in their
I swam a bit
And gave a shout
My answer was
Off ocean floor
Gently nudged me
Back to shore
“We’re happy that you
Came to to see
Out here at sea,
But truly you must
Use a boat
For you never were
Meant to float
Nor sink even
For that is worse
You’re not a whale
And that’s a curse!
Next time you see us
Use a dinghy
Or motor thingy
Don’t visit without
Listen to us for
Whales know best!
There’s no spare air
In watery deep
Unless you’ve gills
Or you can leap
And grab with gusto
Air you need
Before you dive
Below to feed.
Next time you’re here
You should be found
By looking up
And not around.
By Donna JT Smith, June 17, 2017
Next Friday, July 14, is National Macaroni and Cheese Day! Come join in the fun of some cheesy, pasta poetry next week!
Pat at Writer on a Horse is hosting this month's First Spiritual Thursday with thoughts by bloggers on "Getting out of your comfort zone..."
Have you gotten comfortable in one spot? It is easy to do. I do it
when I can. It really is easier than moving on and taking chances. Facing the known, no
matter how unhealthy, unrewarding, even awful, it is, it is
better than meeting the unknown - stepping out of your comfort zone and into the Discomfort Zone...
Being voted “Class Quietest” in high school, I was never one for speaking out or speaking my mind…I was a listener. So you might say that my blog is even out of my comfort zone...
I think my most amazing step outside of my comfort zone, was singing a solo. Singing alone was truly terrifying to me - If I was singing alone outside of the shower or not in the confines of my car, I'd better be in a choir or a quartet...I could do those. But not alone. No solos for me. I knew I would choke. Positively die choking on notes.
But one day I was pushed out of my comfort zone. Being pushed out of my comfort zone was like being pushed out of a plane! Until I realized I had been issued a parachute.
I had been asked by the pastor to sing a solo. Now if the pastor asks you to do something, you do it. If the pastor thought God needed me to (let me rephrase that…) wanted me to, then that is what
I needed to do, and somehow it would be all right. I determined to do it. I proceeded with much deep breathing, deep
prayer, deep dread… and then laid it all aside, placing it in God’s
I learned that I could sing alone in front of people, if it was for God.
When I did that, the most amazing thing happened. He took over. Took over my feet, pushing me forward to the front. Took over my hands, taking away the trembling. Took over my eyes, focusing me on the back window where for the first time I noticed that the lines of the two windows coming together high in the back wall made a cross. Took over my heart, showing me that this was being done for Love. Took over my voice, putting forth a sound of singing I had never heard before.
That day opened up a whole new aspect of worship for me. And I will ever be thankful that I was asked to step out of my comfort zone. It would have been selfish, foolish and even prideful to remain in my comfort zone.
Because of our move, we have begun attending a new church that will be much closer to our new home. There was a call for music “specials”. It is a small church, and we have only recently joined. I was going to wait much longer to “volunteer” to sing.
But then I asked myself “why would you wait to serve?” Yipes! That is right. So I signed up to sing in two weeks. This is going to be a totally new zone. But I am assured that my “Comfort” will be there holding my hand.
Stepping out of your comfort zone, gives you the power to try another zone that you thought would be too far a walk.
that is why I picked the One Little Word: REACH. I’m not really one
for reaching past where I'm comfortable, but the baby poem last week was
a new zone.
Maybe that is why I tried the motorcycle. Way out of my comfort
zone. I was sure I would never ever ride a motorcycle. But here I am riding in a new zone.
I can enjoy the ride now. I can enjoy the singing now. Who knew?
I wonder, what new "Discomfort Zones" will be conquered this year? I
must always remember that getting out of one's Comfort Zone just means
there's a new experience that isn’t quite comfortable yet.
a rocky, overgrown, rough patch or "Discomfort Zone", it can become a
well-worn path as we walk it often, taming it, resulting perhaps in a
new "Comfort Zone"!
Thanks, Pat! I'm glad I finally "talked this through"!