tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post5685154251884842425..comments2024-03-05T06:52:06.523-05:00Comments on Mainely Write: The March Wind Doth BlowDonna Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-28321320371529679412012-03-10T20:34:01.352-05:002012-03-10T20:34:01.352-05:00I liked how you placed the video after " I wo...I liked how you placed the video after " I would say I was intrigued by them but I think I was more enchanted." so I could be intrigued and enchanted for a moment, too before going on. Then "I felt the wind now at our backs, pushing us homeward." Your writing is full of beautiful imagery!<br />(By the way I was so happy to see you waving the friendly wave to me on my blog and hope you can see my waving back to you here) :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-8017064329593673122012-03-10T12:47:03.575-05:002012-03-10T12:47:03.575-05:00I believe I will. It's still gorgeous out and...I believe I will. It's still gorgeous out and I'm not too sore! Thanks for the kind comment.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-82393716602888409222012-03-10T12:45:43.328-05:002012-03-10T12:45:43.328-05:00I'd be delighted!I'd be delighted!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-6314857111044155542012-03-10T11:01:50.196-05:002012-03-10T11:01:50.196-05:00Another great mentor text to share in my classroom...Another great mentor text to share in my classroom! I loved joining you for this walk (I've never been to Maine). My favorite image had to be the laughing leaves!Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-84600246828441545342012-03-10T09:52:09.656-05:002012-03-10T09:52:09.656-05:00I really enjoyed how you melded the video with you...I really enjoyed how you melded the video with your words. Thank you for allowing me to join your walk.LibraryDragon/Storykeeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13695194443477630515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-56417993706717296032012-03-10T08:56:57.379-05:002012-03-10T08:56:57.379-05:00Yes, thank you for taking me on your walk with you...Yes, thank you for taking me on your walk with you. I loved the video too. It's been very windy here as well. You have a lovely way of writing and using your words in sucha special way. I felt i was there. My husband and I traveled to Maine a few summers ago. I would love to come in the Fall. Maybe I'll get that chance yet. So glad nature could help you forget your pain! Lovely! Thanks for sharing! Happy Slicing! :)Spricehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15543099413489004583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-7063546447681072692012-03-10T08:48:18.113-05:002012-03-10T08:48:18.113-05:00Good for you for pushing those aches and pains awa...Good for you for pushing those aches and pains away even if for a little while! Your descriptions were beautiful! Thanks!Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12593604647570046795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-85678054064742645362012-03-10T08:19:50.045-05:002012-03-10T08:19:50.045-05:00Thanks Donna, for taking me along on your walk. W...Thanks Donna, for taking me along on your walk. Wonderful words to make the images move beyond<br />:)<br />BonnieBKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07973593425566621090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-37211925693607672142012-03-10T07:16:12.828-05:002012-03-10T07:16:12.828-05:00Lovely images of your surroundings as you walked. ...Lovely images of your surroundings as you walked. And I started to cheer for you to be able to walk home without needing the car ride. I felt like I was there with you, your writing felt three dimensional because you involved several of the senses, sound and movement.<br />Will you walk today?PAMELA HODGEShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00834410745679219203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-86008988653378576022012-03-10T07:14:22.018-05:002012-03-10T07:14:22.018-05:00Nature took away your pains for those few moments ...Nature took away your pains for those few moments and showed you something much greater. We are birds of a feather Donna. Our writings today say a lot about this state we call home:)Wanda Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345098241488452543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-88783369123183006342012-03-10T06:04:38.216-05:002012-03-10T06:04:38.216-05:00I was on this walk wit you...this is an amazing pi...I was on this walk wit you...this is an amazing piece of writing, Donna - one almost didn't need the video to hear the wind and the red tailed hawk and the pine trees. May I share it with my kids as a mentor text?Tarahttp://tmsteach.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-3410555593927384462012-03-10T02:40:34.759-05:002012-03-10T02:40:34.759-05:00This felt, smelled, sounded like spring to me. Pe...This felt, smelled, sounded like spring to me. Perfect timing, as we were well above zero today and snow was melting everywhere. Lovely writing; you have a nice descriptive touch! :)Paulhttp://birdsandtreesofthemind.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-2973004317263352592012-03-10T01:40:37.690-05:002012-03-10T01:40:37.690-05:00I was enchanted by your words. Strolling invisibly...I was enchanted by your words. Strolling invisibly together with you was a lovely start for a Saturday.<br />It is wonderful when the surrounding allows you to forget the aches and pains or any other worries. <br />TerjeTerje https://www.blogger.com/profile/13569210226711674834noreply@blogger.com