tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post5128607436248189953..comments2024-03-05T06:52:06.523-05:00Comments on Mainely Write: K is for KangarooDonna Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-80516987140299157272012-04-12T23:49:33.780-04:002012-04-12T23:49:33.780-04:00I enjoyed your poem about the kangaroo. The rhyth...I enjoyed your poem about the kangaroo. The rhythms of your first poem really make the story of the baby joey fun to read. I found it interesting the way you ended your poem with lines from your first stanza. I'm learning so much about poetry this month.Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-59724865799347179652012-04-12T19:50:38.342-04:002012-04-12T19:50:38.342-04:00So fun! :) Nicely done.
PS-your pretzel comment...So fun! :) Nicely done.<br /><br />PS-your pretzel comment was too funny!The Lumberjack's Wifehttp://www.thelumberjackswife.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-43954138847988684322012-04-12T12:30:08.558-04:002012-04-12T12:30:08.558-04:00Hi, there! I love your poetry, no doubt about it. ...Hi, there! I love your poetry, no doubt about it. It makes me want to smile, in fact, I do smile as I read it. Thank you. I'm hopping on to read some more posts. Best regards to you. Keep on writing. RubyGrammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07080499751409620799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-82944253931551547632012-04-12T11:07:14.694-04:002012-04-12T11:07:14.694-04:00Donna,
The poems made me smile. I like how you ...Donna, <br /><br />The poems made me smile. I like how you included more information about the kangaroos. My husband and I went to Deadwood, SD for our honeymoon. At that time there was a Roo Ranch nearby I talked him in to going. I am so glad we did we got to hold several joeys that were about 6 months old. They were so soft. <br /><br />I agree with Linda kids would love your poems.LibraryDragon/Storykeeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13695194443477630515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-20111621215421624842012-04-12T08:43:56.676-04:002012-04-12T08:43:56.676-04:00You are deft at the structures, Donna. I like tha...You are deft at the structures, Donna. I like that admonition to the mother to attend to her child! But the second one made me remember that I've often wondered how the baby joeys make it in the pouch when the moms are jumping and bouncing and moving? I I think that second one belongs in a book for children; they would love it. And I like the word "jounce".Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com