tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post3954183380726372283..comments2024-03-05T06:52:06.523-05:00Comments on Mainely Write: A Jealousy PostDonna Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-11101595214393435502017-03-22T00:33:31.303-04:002017-03-22T00:33:31.303-04:00I love your "papery pond" line, and the ...I love your "papery pond" line, and the flow and movement of your poem as it moves down the page. I've also been in all the places you talked about above. I've been carrying notebooks for years but have to resort to bits of paper at times too. Thanks for a lovely blog post Donna!michelle koganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16409095111952431780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-41606228479733246962017-03-20T12:31:27.679-04:002017-03-20T12:31:27.679-04:00What a fun found poem you made from your own notes...What a fun found poem you made from your own notes! I can't find the citation for this, but here's a quote attributed to Edgar Allen Poe: "If you wish to forget anything on the spot, make a note that this thing is to be remembered.”Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-80330081535190813342017-03-19T08:28:23.606-04:002017-03-19T08:28:23.606-04:00Very clever circling of the green, without delving...Very clever circling of the green, without delving right into spring. We are still covered in snow here, too. But I long for a bit of green.Brenda at FriendlyFairyTaleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13368709489341876324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-52002713389458445072017-03-18T18:41:02.338-04:002017-03-18T18:41:02.338-04:00You have captured the stages so well. I keep circl...You have captured the stages so well. I keep circling around a notebook. Forgetting it and resorting to other failing measures. But then again, maybe the scrap of thought is enough to give you a new thought. Like this post!Julieannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08876141420632207823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-61160050654041141752017-03-18T18:27:27.148-04:002017-03-18T18:27:27.148-04:00Love this line:
As you get more experienced you se...Love this line:<br />As you get more experienced you see the dust, and try to remember it. Also I love how you cleverly crafted a found poem from the body of your post. Thanks for commenting on mine. I am in snowy Maine too.travelinmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07362929133418390813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-55157193082773277932017-03-18T18:06:55.724-04:002017-03-18T18:06:55.724-04:00I love this found poem. I'm down the road fro...I love this found poem. I'm down the road from you on the East Coast (well, far down the road in North Carolina), but spring has sprung. Green is flourishing. But, I love winter. And I will miss it. So, enjoy it for a little longer. :) <br /><br />Brian--http://briankissel.weebly.com/brians-blurbsBrian Kisselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01434851617946276353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-55476389723347511632017-03-18T18:05:26.686-04:002017-03-18T18:05:26.686-04:00You make me laugh....because I can relate....but t...You make me laugh....because I can relate....but the post and the poem are lovely. Oh, those papery ponds!Linda Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00833034575304594924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-41688519458809166882017-03-17T22:20:24.763-04:002017-03-17T22:20:24.763-04:00Yesterday I had to deliver a scarf to my neighbor ...Yesterday I had to deliver a scarf to my neighbor up the hill. On my walk up there I composed an amazing slice! I was super excited to get home and write it down. Then I got distracted by another neighbor and by the time I got home, all I had left was the title. The rest of my genius inspiration was completely gone. Your poem is perfect. (Of course...)ssurridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05060787686310398918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-20903152776380676012017-03-17T19:14:41.838-04:002017-03-17T19:14:41.838-04:00Oh my, I think I've been through most of those...Oh my, I think I've been through most of those stages! Even though you couldn't remember what you first might have meant, those captured words still led to writing and poetry!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08210045352610490115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-39479860441105490812017-03-17T17:11:11.577-04:002017-03-17T17:11:11.577-04:00I can relate to your poem too! It's happened ...I can relate to your poem too! It's happened to me many times. Love your found poem!Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01786457482835741494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-46613954849339624232017-03-17T10:12:43.277-04:002017-03-17T10:12:43.277-04:00Oh, yes! I take notes from the pastor's messag...Oh, yes! I take notes from the pastor's messages, too! But every once in a while something pops into my head that might not be divinely placed there! Then I feel so guilty if I try to jot it down!!!<br />I will see what I can find today for your gallery. Thanks!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-81362620369010849362017-03-17T09:45:54.904-04:002017-03-17T09:45:54.904-04:00Donna, I can relate to this post. Just to let you ...Donna, I can relate to this post. Just to let you know, sometimes the priest says something so inspirational in his homily that I do scramble for a piece of anything to write the thought down. Your poem paired well with your thoughts so all came together. REMINDER: I do not have an offering from you for my winter gallery. I am designing it this weekend. It sounds like you have a lot of snow to weave into a poetic thought-the tree laden with snow might be your image.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.com