tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post2654435182666294611..comments2024-03-05T06:52:06.523-05:00Comments on Mainely Write: Robin You're Robbin'Donna Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-15809405495784157542012-03-26T20:22:36.168-04:002012-03-26T20:22:36.168-04:00I love your positive attitude about waking to the ...I love your positive attitude about waking to the birds...it comes through so clearly with the line "Isn't it thrilling to wake to the sound?" Thanks for sharing this fun poem. Great writing!Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404917167112072640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-81394173827044359892012-03-26T18:07:31.099-04:002012-03-26T18:07:31.099-04:00You just put it all together so well, Donna. This...You just put it all together so well, Donna. This is exactly what that robin outside is doing, a real spring sound! Love the rhythm!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-83887515545971739442012-03-26T17:25:14.792-04:002012-03-26T17:25:14.792-04:00Loved the second stanza particularly...this was so...Loved the second stanza particularly...this was so much fun to read aloud.Tara @ A Teaching Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07195982194362559883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-23023730135949248922012-03-26T11:50:23.742-04:002012-03-26T11:50:23.742-04:00You are most welcome to share! I'm delighted....You are most welcome to share! I'm delighted.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-34295782912411872522012-03-26T11:38:34.035-04:002012-03-26T11:38:34.035-04:00I love this! I read it outloud and it just rolled ...I love this! I read it outloud and it just rolled of my tongue. Great rhythm and rhymes! Great word choices! LOVE IT!Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18011661904689079860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-55792303118753828702012-03-26T11:16:26.822-04:002012-03-26T11:16:26.822-04:00I like it. I can hear them through the pictures y...I like it. I can hear them through the pictures you paint with your words.LibraryDragon/Storykeeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13695194443477630515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-74443913095707738252012-03-26T09:22:09.015-04:002012-03-26T09:22:09.015-04:00I love that you can enjoy this bit of heavenly hap...I love that you can enjoy this bit of heavenly happiness instead of being grumpy that the birds woke you! Great verbs in the 2nd stanza - warbling, trilling, spilling - so descriptive. May I share it with my students?Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-82873875176407806882012-03-26T07:40:42.920-04:002012-03-26T07:40:42.920-04:00You play with words to create such fun poems. Each...You play with words to create such fun poems. Each time I read one I am in awe.elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.com