tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post2511400599944094706..comments2024-03-05T06:52:06.523-05:00Comments on Mainely Write: Finally It's My Dey!Donna Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-91934592809396567002011-05-28T14:02:11.016-04:002011-05-28T14:02:11.016-04:00I love the line about how grey is penciling on pap...I love the line about how grey is penciling on paper. I wear a lot of grey. Unfortunately, it keeps popping up on my head. Must be the wisdom pushing through. Ha! :) <br /><br />DianaDiana Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09983334708228942464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6604430404780110710.post-90437666488232522812011-05-26T09:03:17.592-04:002011-05-26T09:03:17.592-04:00That repeat at the beginnings of each verse is gre...That repeat at the beginnings of each verse is great, & also that you turned things around, like 'grey dapples.' Nice allusions all the way through.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com